Vacation last year. I went to boja. I went to boja with my parents. In there I went to feild for helped my grandfather plant. And then, I and grandpa went to river because I was very dirty. In the river me take a bath and I was very clear.
Next day I visited plances together. My friend and I called it ''melalang buana''. Melalang buana is name for hunting expirience. In there my feel was incouge.
Enjoy these.
This is when I in the jungle.
heheheheee
This photo is cool right? heheheee
wagh gambare apik banget tp wong.e elek ogg
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hehehehe :p
kata-kata dan struktur bagus tapi masi kurang mendetail kejadianya
recount ne singkat elek siasan
BalasHapusgambar re seng apik ketek tok
akhh mbahmu akh,
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wah kreatif ik, ada fotonya juga,, ganteeng, keteknya :D
BalasHapuseemmm.. ati2 y sama tanda baca sama huruf kapital... judul harusnya depannya huruf kapital,, :P
trs pnulisan "i" it dimana2 pkenya huruf besar setahuku..
baguss, perlu dikembangin tuh,
BalasHapuskalo bs ditambah lg ceritanya biar lbh menarik,
oke, cukup itu aj.
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